在英語中，怎樣提高自己的寫作能力呢？現(xiàn)在夢想背帶夏令營告訴你英語作文高分策略。

    高考英語書面表達新的評分標準中提倡使用較復雜結構或較高詞匯。而以前高考書面表達評分主要是根據(jù)要點和語言準確程度而定，因此考生在書面表達時，也只注重不遺漏要點和正確使用語言知識（如謂語的時態(tài)、名詞單復數(shù)等）這兩個方面，很少考慮或根本不考慮“使用較復雜結構或較高詞匯”，導致最后寫出來的東西千篇一律，缺乏生氣，影響了自己的成績。

那么，考生怎樣才能在書面表達中避免語句表達單一化，寫出好的句子來呢？夢想北大夏令營結合新的評分標準，對學生書面表達中的一些語句作一分析，并提出一些寫作建議，以幫助考生寫出豐富多彩的句子出來，提高自己的書面表達能力。

一、要適當?shù)囟嗍褂靡恍┰~組、習語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采，豐富語句的表現(xiàn)力。如：

【原文】she doesn’t like sports.

【修正】she cares nothing for sports.

【原文】a new railway is being built in my hometown.

【修正】a new railway is under construction in my hometown.

   英語習語、詞組十分豐富，考生在自己的書面表達中，能適當?shù)厥褂眠@些短語，無疑是一個提高水平的十分行之有效的方法。

二、盡量避免過多地重復使用的某一單詞，必要時應選擇使用其它恰當?shù)耐�義詞或詞組來代替。如：

【原文】i like reading while my brother likes watching television.

【修正】i like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

【原文】we’ve built a new classroom building besides the old one and we’ve also built a library where the old playground used to be.

【修正】we’ve built a new classroom building besides the old one and we’ve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.

三、注意使用不同結構、不同長度的句子，盡量使句型多樣化，避免單調(diào)。如：

【原文】there is a new classroom building on one side of the road. there used to be a playground on the other side before. but there is a library now. there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines in the library. there is a new playground in front of the school. there are a lot of trees in and around the school.

【修正】on one side of the road there is a new classroom building. on the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another new building — our library, in which you can find all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. the playground is now in front of the school. we have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.

原文在語法上并沒有什么錯誤，但由于通篇過多地使用了there be 結構，不但使得表達的內(nèi)容顯得單調(diào)乏味，而且還給閱卷老師一種“不成熟”的感覺。我們可通過轉換句式來避免句子結構的單一化。同一個意思，可使用不同的表達方法，這樣做既可以突出重點，又能豐富表達，增加文采。

四、多使用一些主從復合句來代替簡單句，可使書面表達行文更加豐富多彩。如：

【原文】we had to go home.

【修正】all we could do was to go home.

【原文】the meal was very nice. we all enjoyed it very much.

【修正】the meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.

【原文】i studied chinese, maths, english, physics, chemistry and computer at school.

【修正】the main subjects i studied at school included chinese, maths, english, physics, chemistry and computer.

五、改變句子開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再在句末加上一個狀語。我們可以適當?shù)匕岩恍┏煞郑ㄈ鐮钫Z）提前位于句子的開頭，使整個句子讀起來有點跌宕起伏，增加書面表達的表現(xiàn)力。

【原文】we met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

【修正】early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.